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Clarity

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Gorgeous crystal streams
Wash away confusion
This is for Six-Word-Stories theme: Clarity.

At first I wasn't too sure what to write, thought of wine glasses, glass plates, sea glass, a clear summer day... but I think this was my best idea. :)

Hope you enjoy this!
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I like the way you have described things and how you've mostly talked about what clarity can give you, which is quite an interesting perception and way of going about it, I think.

The imagery is awesome and I feel you've managed to convey the concept quite profoundly in that respect...

I feel you could use a bit of punctuation, but then again, because there are none, it feels more flowing because of that, if that makes sense?

Great stuff. :nod: