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It Takes Moments by saevuswinds It Takes Moments by saevuswinds
some more poetry for you guys. Not sure what to think about it.
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roballen2 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Professional Artist
Landing is the problem. I like this.
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much.
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roballen2 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Professional Artist
All Good
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witte-draak Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
There's something about this that just clicks with me. Well done.
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much!
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Vagrant-Inventor Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
This is really cute, I like it when you write happy poems :D
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks! :D
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks! :D
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Vagrant-Inventor Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome!
You're welcome!
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Irixian Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Professional Writer
awww :)
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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Miluiel-the-Friendly Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student General Artist
I LIKE! As an author and sometime poet myself, I really like how this flows. Hard to describe, but that means it's really good! Congrats on a beautiful piece of poetry.
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saevuswinds Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student Writer
Oh wow! Thank you so much! :0 It means a lot to me!
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Miluiel-the-Friendly Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student General Artist
You are most welcome, dear. *doffs top hat, bows*
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